Photo Feedback - The Banjo Picker's Ball

It's been a few weeks since I've put myself out there for feedback. Only because of time limits, not a lack of interest, so I'm happy to be back in the fray and look forward to hearing what I need to hear.

This photo is from a gathering of banjo players, that we went to on Palm Sunday. It was in a basement, so was dark and cramped, but it was oh so fun. I got lots of dud photos from the shoot, but most of the good ones were of my Enzo, who must have been in a decent light and far enough away to allow some variety in my shots.

I liked the way the other players on the left and the wood pillar on the right framed him and was one of the few without shadows on his face.  Candid shots are really where I could use some advice. When I prop my boys up for photo shoots, I feel like I can get a few decent shots. But, candids present so many lighting, framing and other challenges. I'd love any advice in addition to feedback on this particular photo.

Thank you in advance.

So, what do you think?

Photo Feedback

I missed last week's photo feedback opportunity. After submitting for the first time the week prior, I was so happy with the feedback I received I do want to continue, but it just didn't happen last week. Even looking at others' photos and finding the wonderful (the easy part) and the could-be-improved (not so easy) is helpful in trying to become a better photographer.

So, here's my submission. I've been wanting to get a BW shot of the boys in their jeans and no shirt for a while. Enzo was looking to pose for me last Thursday, so I pulled this from my checklist and tried it out.  The day was rainy, but we were getting a decent amount of sun flowing in the kitchen door. We were very limited in terms of space with the oven behind me not allowing for a lot of back up room. I was using my 50mm prime lens, too, hence the close crop.

Not making excuses! Just explaining.. ha ha. I haven't formally checked it off the list because I want to get the same shot of Nico, but also, I'm not sure I'm satisfied with it.  So, go to town... let me know what you think. I really appreciate it.

Shot with my Pentax K5, FA 50 mm 1.4.  f2.8, SS 125, ISO 400.